( A short story in a way , hope it reads true and if it touched the heart then It did what it was meant to do )
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.........A Willows Wish ............

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For we are all but here for a moment and then time comes to take us
away , Live each day as your last , for time is the thief and it doesn't
announce it's coming , so speak softly and feel each breath , for one
day it to will be taken from you .Be the bird on the willow tree , take
comfort in it's shadow and it will shield you from harm , Take flight
for you are not grounded for a reason , spread your wings and see what
dreams can only imagine , So that when the time comes you can remember
all that you had and once more your shadows will meet and you will be
remembered ""
© RavenHeart /2019
.........A Willows Wish ............
The wind softly stirred the branch's in it's
attempt to pull the last leaf from it's hold .The tree felt it's subtle
caress but held onto the one leaf left hanging , although dying into
it's final days it was reluctant in releasing it knowing that then it
was bare and the time was near .Then it's world would become but a stark
memory of what it had been as it's life would be barren again .Then came a
flutter and it felt the return of the one who had spent the summer in it's
hollow , each day it had felt it's company and now it was leaving as
well ,After a few minutes it felt it's release as it flew away ,it's
shadow fading away .
She held the crumpled
picture in her fist , how many times had she looked at it and then in a
fit of emotions had it ended up in this form ! It wasn't that she wanted
to destroy it .But each time It became more cracked and each time she
did her best to straighten it the picture became more faded as the image
disappeared .But as before once again she did her best to put it back
as she sat under the tree.She came there everyday come what may ,but
again with silent apologies whispered she did her best to take the
creases away to expose the image .Frozen in time it was all she really
had and with it came all the emotions and memories and she could feel
the anger coming again ..And yet each day it was a repeat and soon she
knew it would be to faded to recognize anymore ! I want to fade away to
she whispered as a tear came .There in silence she sat with her thoughts
till she heard a subtle flutter of wings and as eyes searched the tree
she see's something looking at her and for a moment eyes locked as each
viewed the other as in knowing then just as suddenly to take flight
again , it's shadow disappearing into hers and then gone .
The axe fell hard as he split another piece of timber , The season was
ending and soon his hard work would pay off as the winds of time would
blow in the new season .He stared at the pieces laying around the block
he used to split the wood , enough ! He needed to walk away from it for a
while . And as he walked he saw the starkness of everything , how
devoid everything had become without him even noticing it . The leaves
crunched under his weight as he strolled through what had been a world
alive not that long ago , now it was bare , death now was all he saw
.Taking a moment he stopped beside the willow tree , it's leaves all
gone except for a one which lingered .He leaned against it's bark , it
felt cold and as if it to was dead ,His mind wandered and he stared
around at what was now a barren landscape , how fast it goes he thought
.His shadow had merged with the trees and he stretched his arms out as
he watched his shadow appear , Like a tree is how we seem to be words
quietly escaped him .Then a flutter and as he looked up there it was ,
the bird which had lived in the hollow had come back .Staring at each
other they seemed connected .He moved further from the tree to see it
better and in one final look it flew away , it's shadow flew into his
for a second then it was gone
She
stared at the photo , still remembering the time and as tears filled
her eyes she held it to her heart .Her head fell to her chest as she
breathed in deeply but the tears came as always , Her body shock as she
let it take control as the feeling was real and as much as it hurt it
was all she could have
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He continued walking along the path , eyes were
red and sore and as he fought back the tears he saw her sitting by the
tree , her shadow casting itself onto his path .He didn't look at her
but her shadow showed what she was feeling .Lowering his head he
continued walking till his shadow fell onto hers
.High above the bird
flew watching as the shadows merged and slowly disappeared .And it flew
back to the tree where it perched looking but finding nothing but an old
crumbled photograph laying on the grass , along the path were
footprints leading nowhere .And in one final flight it flew past where
there had been two and as it crossed shadows unseen it to disappeared
for it's time had come ,and the wind blew softly and the tree
gave up it's last ....................
©
Edge/2019
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An absolutely beautiful story. Captivated from first to last. It reminded me in a way of Shel Silverstein's "The Giving Tree" but this is more than that. There were a few elements that really grabbed my attention. The tree desperately trying to hold on to the leaf, the crossing of shadows which is a touch without touching, and the bird that seems to be the element that bind tree, he, and she together. The bird interacts with each character. It fills the hollow of the tree and is seen by both he and she. They all feel its presence in some way. And as the bird takes flight, he and she have gone and the final leaf falls. I feel like this story is taking place in the fall.... the season that is not quite dead but dying. The leaves almost all gone, the bird about to migrate off, and it seems to metaphorically symbolize the emotions of both human characters. Makes me wonder if it is just a changing season or if time is really up... because like the bird, time flies.
ReplyDeleteThank you , not that bad a read then , took all of fifteen minutes , and the tittle was the hardest part which came after I finished , appreciate that you read into it , always love hearing another s perspective on my words ............thank you
DeleteI've read it a few times now. I had to reign myself in or you would have ended up with a literary analysis about as long as the write itself. There is so much imagery and metaphor infused into the entire piece, and many different ways to read into it, which makes it very intriguing. Those writes that are quick like that just seem to want to be written.
DeleteLol.....well I had the idea in my thoughts and today the words fell into place , but thank you , glad you enjoyed reading the write
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